Brian Feutz
1 min readMar 28, 2022

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I read a couple and yes, the quality of your writing is very good, Tim. Some things I noticed: Your ‘voice’ felt aggressive to me, with a hint of superiority. Confidence is fantastic but maybe insert some compassion and empathy. Also consider throwing in some bullet point lists for skimmers (most readers are), to more succinctly explain some of your claims. Example “Don’t be a shitty landlord — here are five things you should consider” (and then bullet points or chapter heads). Same with “Sanctions won’t work.” I read both of those stories and don’t feel like I came away with a simple understanding of how/why — which should be the central point of your message (if your article is offering advice).

So, while you definitely have good writing skills, it’s possible that the manner in which you present it could be tweaked a bit.

Just the opinion of one guy.

Keep it up and best wishes.

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Brian Feutz
Brian Feutz

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